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Getting Ella's birthday gift and my kitten bed

My Plan for a Recount

Title of my story:

Getting Ella’s birthday gift and my kitten bed.

Orientation: Use keywords to explain

Where	farmes	Here are some connectives you may want to use instead of THEN to move your story on: after a while      afterwards      at once     at this moment at this point       before that     finally     first (second third etc...) here            in the end       lastly        later on      meanwhile next     next time     now      on another occasion previously       since     soon      straightaway   until then when      whenever      while
When	weekend
Who	Mum,Me

These are the things I am writing about in the right order: (Use keywords only - you can add details when you write your story.)

Event 1	Get ella's gift
Event 2	My cat bed
Event 3	Thanking my mum
Event 4

WALHT write a recount. Success Criteria: An orientation that describes where, when and who. A sequence of events in the right order. Connectives to lead the reader on ( e.g. first, next, after a while, a moment later, at last, finally) A conclusion. A personal comment.

Start with your title below.  

Getting Ella’s birthday gift and my Kitten bed.

First my mum and I went to get Ella a card we got her one with balloons on it it was very colorful.

 then we went to farmers and we got Ella a grow your own crystal and a bug thing that you put a bug in and you can look at it more closely.

also I payed for it and gave the change to my mum and we walked by bed covers and we found this Kitten one and cushion and pillow and it was so CUTE!!! I love it and my mum got it for me I was very happy now I have to do 25 jobs for my mum now but it is fine because i will do anything for my CUTE!!! Kitten bed. I had a great time.

Swimming sports

I went to my school swimming sports my favourite sport was back stroke and I came 3 I think I did very well I love swimming and I did other ones to and there was cool big kid ones too but they looked a bit hard tho it was the best time of my life and one other sport I came 2 I  did very well and then it was morning tea I had 1/2 of my lunch and saved the rest of my lunch.